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Overall Band
Task Response
6.5
Coherence and Cohesion
7.0
Lexical Resource
6.5
Grammatical Range and Accuracy
6.5
Essay prompt
Some people think employees should be allowed to work from home whenever possible, while others believe working in an office is more productive. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
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Nowadays, working from home has become a common choice in many companies. Some people believe employees should have this freedom whenever the job allows it, because it can save travel time and make workers more comfortable. Others argue that office work is better for productivity because people can communicate quickly and managers can see the progress more clearly.
On the one hand, home working is good for workers because they can arrange their day in a flexible way. For example, a parent can start early, collect a child from school and finish tasks later. This kind of freedom may reduce stress and help people keep their job for longer. It can also help people focus on tasks such as writing reports or checking data, because they avoid some interruptions in a busy office. Also, companies can spend less money on office space if many staff stay at home.
On the other hand, working in an office can be more effective in some situations. When a team need to solve a problem quickly, face-to-face discussion is often faster than sending messages all day. New employees also learn better when they watch experienced colleagues and ask questions directly. If everyone works separately, the team spirit may become weaker.
In my opinion, employees should be allowed to work from home when their tasks are suitable, but it should not be the only option. A mixed system is the best solution, as workers can enjoy flexibility while still meeting colleagues regularly. However, companies need clear rules, because without them home working can make communication becomes slower and some people may feel isolated.
Score summary
- The essay responds to the full question and presents a clear personal opinion.
- Paragraphing is generally clear, but some ideas are developed in a broad way.
- The examples are relevant, though they need more specific context or detail.
- Vocabulary has some range, but several expressions are repetitive or informal.
- Complex sentences are attempted, but accuracy problems still limit the writing.
Task-specific feedback
Position
The position is clear in both the introduction and conclusion. The reader can understand that the writer supports a flexible mixed arrangement.
Idea development
The main ideas are relevant, but some explanations remain general. The essay needs clearer cause-and-effect development to show why each point matters.
Examples
The examples support the argument, but they mostly describe broad situations. A more specific job, company, or workplace scenario would be more convincing.
Paragraphing
The body paragraphs have clear roles, with one paragraph focused on home working and another on office productivity.
Task response
The essay discusses both views and gives an opinion, but parts of the argument need fuller development before the response can be consistently stronger.
Detailed feedback
This essay has a clear overall structure and discusses the main advantages of working from home and working in an office. The opinion is easy to identify, and the paragraphs are logically arranged. The main limitation is depth of development: several sentences introduce reasonable ideas, but the explanation and examples remain quite general. The language communicates meaning clearly, although some collocations and complex sentence forms need more control.
Grammar issues
Original
When a team need to solve a problem quickly...
Correction
When a team needs to solve a problem quickly...
Explanation
The subject “a team” is singular here, so the verb should be “needs.”
Original
managers can see the progress more clearly
Correction
managers can monitor progress more clearly
Explanation
“Monitor progress” is a more natural academic collocation than “see the progress.”
Original
home working can make communication becomes slower
Correction
home working can make communication become slower
Explanation
After “make + object,” use the base verb form, so “become” is correct.
Vocabulary upgrades
Original expression
good for workers
Better option
beneficial for employees
Explanation
“Beneficial” is more precise and formal for an academic essay.
Original expression
spend less money on office space
Better option
reduce office-related costs
Explanation
This option is more concise and suits the business context better.
Original expression
team spirit may become weaker
Better option
team cohesion may decline
Explanation
“Team cohesion” is a more accurate phrase for workplace relationships.
Sentence improvements
Original
On the one hand, home working is good for workers because they can arrange their day in a flexible way.
Improved
On the one hand, working from home can be beneficial for employees because it allows them to organize their day more flexibly.
Why
The improved sentence uses a more natural phrase, avoids informal wording, and expresses the benefit more clearly.
Original
For example, a parent can start early, collect a child from school and finish tasks later.
Improved
For example, a parent in an administrative role may start early, collect a child from school, and complete routine tasks later in the evening.
Why
The revised example is more specific because it gives a type of worker and a clearer work situation.
Original
However, companies need clear rules, because without them home working can make communication becomes slower and some people may feel isolated.
Improved
However, companies need clear rules because, without them, working from home can make communication slower and leave some employees feeling isolated.
Why
The rewrite fixes the verb form, improves punctuation, and makes the final idea smoother.
Next steps
- In the next essay, practise developing each body paragraph with more specific explanation.
- Include at least one concrete job, company, or everyday workplace situation for each main idea.
- Check subject-verb agreement, clause structure, and preposition use in complex sentences.
- Use the final two minutes to check whether all parts of the question have been addressed.
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